Need help with slogan!

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I have the oportunity to have a sign made that is outside the mall where I am located.
I have 2 choices, Take the sign and split it in half and advertise both of my stores or just take it for one store.

So for Lighthouse Cards & Gifts I have this done so far:
Now keep in mind, I have a picture of a lighthouse that will go before the words for the Card Shop


Lighthouse
Cards & Gifts
“Your full
Service Cards
Store & Gifts”
Features
Hallmark Cards
Willow Tree Angels

Second Level
848-6233

What I currently have for Alpine is:

Alpine Flowers & Gifts
Upper Mall - 848-5657
“The store with
Choices, Quality & Services”

I am looking for a small tag line that will tell people that I am a full florist. Something catchy.
Any suggestions.
Sorry there will be no royalties paid, but a kiss and a pat on the behind!

Thanks
Luc

PS I have downloaded the picture of the lighthouse logo I have been using in all of my ads.
 

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"for all your floral design needs"

"flowers for all occasions"

"the one stop flower shop"

Sorry these are a bit boring but its all i can think of at the minute.
 
Flowers to brighten every occasion..........

(I'll try to think of some others)
 
Custom created floral designs and home decor for all occasions delivered worldwide.
 
Luc,

I can't improve on the suggestions already given for the Flowers part. I like Connie's suggestion.

May I suggest some small changes in the REST of your signs? I think you can simplify a little bit. What about:

Lighthouse
"Full Service
Cards & Gifts"

We feature
Hallmark Cards
Willow Tree Angels

Second Level
848-6233

What I currently have for Alpine is:

Alpine Flowers & Gifts
Upper Mall 848-5657
"Quality Choice Service"
 
Beth said:
Luc,
May I suggest some small changes in the REST of your signs? I think you can simplify a little bit. What about:

Lighthouse
"Full Service
Cards & Gifts"

We feature
Hallmark Cards
Willow Tree Angels

Second Level
848-6233
Click to expand...

Excellent point Beth. Don't make the customer labor over too many words. JMHO.
I like Connie's slogan too.
 
When I think of a lighthouse, I think of
a beacon
a guide
shining
Can you incoprporate any of those words something...
Like
Let Alpine's Lighthouse....
Alpines Lighthouse shining light onto gifts for the past 20 years....
We light the way to gift giving choices...sorry ..no coffee yet...But I would make the lighthouse work for me...
Sher
 
Thank you all for your suggestions. Will look at it and decide on the choice when I have all my answers.
Thanks Beth for you suggestions. It may work for the size of the sign I have. I still have to look at the size and go from there.

THe slogan I am looking for is something that will cover all of my bases. Happy to sad occasions, for him or her.... etc.

Luc
 
This is harder than it seems. I totally agree with less words is better, people don't have time to dilly dally. But to then come up with something that lets people know you are full service - yikes.

Might you be best off with 'Full Service Florist' for less words and right to the point. Skipping the catchy sloagan altogether.

I hope I have helped rather than made it worse.
 
mines is "scent from the heart, delivered to the door", took me ages to come up with that lol
 
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