Need Help with writting a letter

[Luc]

I am writting a letter to be sent to perspective clients to let them know of new products I will carry at my store. This product are shortbreads cookies, just to die for, melt in your mouth cookies.

Anyway I want to introduce them to different new clients, businesses etc. I will be sending this letter with a brochure that I got with 2 companies I want to push product.

Anyway I wrote a letter and I want somebody to read it and make proper correction or ideas on phrasing. I am not that good in this field.

Anyone wishing to help me out, Pm me and I will send the letter.

thanks
Luc

 

[BOSS]

Send it to me Luc... I can even spell in Canadian

[email protected]

 

[Palms]

and i know the queens english lol, send it to me if you like also, paula

 

[Dee Dee]

Boss, Palms - You two are so funny!!!

 

[Luc]

Thanks everyone. I got two response and they are helping at the moment.

Luc

 

[Victoria]

If you wish I can have a look as well Luc.

Really nice talking with you today.

V

 

[Doug Hatcher]

I will help.

I will put pen to paper but you should first send me lots of the products (free) so I can properly extol the value, and quality.

 

[Luc]

Doug,
You are so kind!
I will forward your favorite case of cereal your way tomorow.

Luc

 

[Johan]

Don't just sent them the letter and brochure sendthem a sample. It will create a much better impression.

 

[Luc]

This may not be an option to send a sample to everyone I want to touch. I am thinking 150 mailing. By the time I send a sample, it may cost me more than $1,000.00. THe brochure is very well done and should sell the product.
It sold me on it.

Luc

 

[Palms]

Good Luck with your new venture anyway Luc, maybe a follow up call should do the trick? I would love to do this but dont have the suppliers near me. Also looked at gourmet mark up and its rubbish over here, think it is much better where you are..

 

[Johan]

This may not be an option to send a sample to everyone I want to touch. I am thinking 150 mailing. By the time I send a sample, it may cost me more than $1,000.00. THe brochure is very well done and should sell the product.
It sold me on it.

Luc

If you are sending a brochure to so many companies, if they need a little nudge to come on board, it maybe just worth it.

 

[lady0003]

Please make sure you check your spelling. Writing only has one t not 2. That will be important to clients.