Infinite said:
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Since I don't know the size of ad you're running I am assuming a smaller ad rather than a full page ad.
Keep it simple.
Tighten your message to just three points. You will have more impact. Why, because people will more easily see three bullets rather than a longer list of bullets. Remember, most people skim. You need to catch their eye and direct them to log onto
www.flowerchat.com. Once they do that you have them where you want them. HERE!!!
Your first bullet "wire services" bugs me. You might want to rank the bullets in order of importance. I am not sure most florists would view wire services as the most important aspect of the floral business.
I come here to hear the latest industry news. There are some of you out there (and you know who your are....) that gets the inside news and you post it here well before that news is published in the traditional news services. Ex. FTD's end of year stockholders meeting.
This forum is also a
"source for problem solving" Here is an example. FTD and Norton antivirus thread. Very helpful learning what FTD was doing. I read that thread, I called FTD, and then I posted what I learned from FTD rep to that thread in an attempt to help other florists.
Yes: I know I have used two FTD examples, but those were two examples off the top of my head.
Tips and techniques is also helpful, especially for newbies as well as oldies.
Technology is also a good bullet
I don't see as much discussion about website enhancement advertising and marketing bullets.
Drop the testimonials, or at least reduce them.
Hope this helps
Joe